Dracula

Hey there, Ben! I'm here to review. :D I found a few things to point out which could improve this work... The Chaplain didn't return after leaving the last time ...

Okay. One more review and I'm up to date. Please keep tagging me when you write more! I'd love to follow this novel to the end. :) He was not ...

Here are more of my random thoughts as I read... She knew who he was, and she'd been surprised that the big shot CEO of Blackwood Industries would come to ...

Hey, ScarlettFire. It's me again. :) Eric and he had agreed on one thing before they left the apartment; Chase needed to appear injured, so they'd given him an injury. ...

Hello again, Tsunami! Dracula is back to review Chapter 3. :) The big, pale moon rose into the starry sky. Casting its light over the white valley. I reckon the ...

Okay, let's give this a quick review to shuffle it out of the Green Room. 'Cause I'm sure you'll agree this doesn't need to be in the Green Room. :P ...

Hey there, jumpingsheep. Happy Review Day! Becca awoke to her phone chiming, its hollow tone filling the dead space of her apartment. She sat up, pushing her grey comforter off ...

Hey there, occymay! I'll review by typing down my thoughts as I read through this. Hopefully I'll be able to help in some way. :D “Hey, Willow, what are you ...

Alright, here we go for another review. "Can you turn the music down, please?" he asked, trying ot distract himself from the thought. Typo! Trying to* distract himself. What made ...

"I was in my mother's office," he called back, tilting his face up into the spray to get the last of the blood off his face. It had been caked ...

Alright, I'm back. Time to read through another chapter! The copper sun was slowly rising into the dark starry sky. Pink spread across the night sky. The pale moon gently ...

Hey there, gema11. I love reading people's dreams and yours was very interesting. I wonder who or what that pock-marked boy represents? Isn't the mind so weird sometimes?! :P One ...

Hey there! I only have a few things to point out. Overall, the plot is very well thought-out, and the characters were believable. I think you should just try to ...

Guess who... 'tis Dracula! He froze up for a second and then screamed, bolting upright and whacking his head on something hard. Just a nitpick, but the 'up' after 'froze' ...

Hey, Scarlett! I'm here to get this out of the Green Room, and hopefully help in some way. You don't seem to need too much help though. I can tell ...