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Wow. I really liked his piece. The way you express your feelings, the way its written. Ah yes and also the repition. keep it up! ;)

Wow that was very touching! Loved it!

Speechless! This was a very beautiful poem! And the ending is perfect as it is really. :) Just Keep rocking poetry! ^^

Well this was quite touching! Cant wait to read the rest.

Wow!! I was hooked from the start! :D Awesome debut! Cant waiit to read the rest!! Really awesome! Im afraid i have no corrections to make xD Keep up the ...

I really liked this poem! And i can imagine the pain just from reading it! Very emotional and truue! Keep it up! :)

whoaah!!!! this was awesomely GOOD ! haha i loved it! Especially the way you gave an image of how a rollercoaster runs but in hell, sort of. Lets just say ...

i loved this one too!! You gonna continue it?

Aaaah ! nice i liked it! :) but i must admit that i was quite hoping for a happy ending u_u I mean did she really have to leave? -_-

ooouh ! i lloved it !! i also likeed the suspense here! way to go! keep up the good work im affraid i don't have any corrections to make u_u

CANT WAIT OFR CHAPTER 7 !!!! Im just hooked on this story! Haha! Im looving the suspense here! I wonder what's going to happen next .... u_u

Omg OMg Omg !!This is just as awesome as the previous ones!!!!!!!!!! ANd the end was sooo sad! Like i actually cried! o.o Haha wow you have a talent ! ...

Hahaha I loved the rhymes and rythm of this poem. Plus, it was humourous too! Awesome, keep up the good work! =)

Haa i loved this poem. I liked the way every verse starts the same way and yeah the messgae of your poem. Lovely

Awsomeness! I loved the way i felt and could relate to the writer's pain. Keep it up! Not much ot review since you're so good! =.=