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Re: Invade My Heart
Wow. I really liked his piece. The way you express your feelings, the way its written. Ah yes and also the repition. keep it up! ;)
Sun Sep 25, 2011 12:13 am -
Re: Unheard Screams- a 9/11 Memorial
Wow that was very touching! Loved it!
Fri Sep 09, 2011 11:40 pm -
Re: Things I'm Afraid Of
Speechless! This was a very beautiful poem! And the ending is perfect as it is really. :) Just Keep rocking poetry! ^^
Tue Aug 23, 2011 11:19 pm -
Re: deleted
Well this was quite touching! Cant wait to read the rest.
Fri Aug 19, 2011 12:56 pm -
Re: Gravestone
Wow!! I was hooked from the start! :D Awesome debut! Cant waiit to read the rest!! Really awesome! Im afraid i have no corrections to make xD Keep up the ...
Fri Aug 19, 2011 11:34 am -
Re: deleted
I really liked this poem! And i can imagine the pain just from reading it! Very emotional and truue! Keep it up! :)
Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:09 am -
Re: Hell's Rollercoaster
whoaah!!!! this was awesomely GOOD ! haha i loved it! Especially the way you gave an image of how a rollercoaster runs but in hell, sort of. Lets just say ...
Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:47 pm -
Re: Broken: Chapter 1: A friend, an ally, a lover?
i loved this one too!! You gonna continue it?
Thu Aug 04, 2011 5:42 pm -
Re: Forever Together
Aaaah ! nice i liked it! :) but i must admit that i was quite hoping for a happy ending u_u I mean did she really have to leave? -_-
Wed Jul 27, 2011 7:17 pm -
Re: Addicted to a Shadow - Chapter One
ooouh ! i lloved it !! i also likeed the suspense here! way to go! keep up the good work im affraid i don't have any corrections to make u_u
Wed Jul 27, 2011 12:24 am -
Re: Scars: Part 6
CANT WAIT OFR CHAPTER 7 !!!! Im just hooked on this story! Haha! Im looving the suspense here! I wonder what's going to happen next .... u_u
Sun Jul 24, 2011 12:19 am -
Re: Scars: Part 5
Omg OMg Omg !!This is just as awesome as the previous ones!!!!!!!!!! ANd the end was sooo sad! Like i actually cried! o.o Haha wow you have a talent ! ...
Sat Jul 23, 2011 7:03 pm -
Re: Booty Shorts
Hahaha I loved the rhymes and rythm of this poem. Plus, it was humourous too! Awesome, keep up the good work! =)
Tue Jun 14, 2011 10:37 pm -
Re: Always and forever
Haa i loved this poem. I liked the way every verse starts the same way and yeah the messgae of your poem. Lovely
Mon Jun 13, 2011 6:12 pm -
Re: How could you?
Awsomeness! I loved the way i felt and could relate to the writer's pain. Keep it up! Not much ot review since you're so good! =.=
Mon Jun 13, 2011 3:09 pm