Doxie00

Wow this was.....amaziing like really omg....Like i could reeeaaaallllyy feel the emotions in this poem, the way you were feeling at the time you wrote this. I'm sorry....Your work just ...

Wow. This was an awsome piece girl ! Im impressed ! I, it's like you were talking to me...:/ It really shows the conflicting emotions within you. But please don't ...

Haha this was funny to me. I like the way you made the poem matter-of-factly; though it could have had more emotions in it. -__- Also, i liked the title. ...

Wow. So first of all, i loved the title of the story...and the way you started it. It kept me reading till the end...honestly i was sad when it endend ...

Well...this poem doesn't really say EXACTLY what is making the narrator like he is. I mean i expected a turning point , an explanation at the end that would explain ...

wow omggg!! This was soo sad!! :( But still sooo well written ! And it kept me interested and anticipating till the end ! :) I just loved it ! ...

When i read this, it made me think of myself...what i've been through makes me write such things myself. Your poem was a little confusing as there were small gramatical ...

Haa I this poem. First i would like to say that if you had put it in stanzas, it would appear reeally better. If not, i loved the thoughts that ...

heyy girrl i actually liked this poem. If you think it bad then those other stories of yours must be awesome! :) I know what you mean....well don't force yourself. ...

Wow...this was just amazing ! I could feel the girl's pain. Everything she went through. I loved the way you let the reader feel the emotion of the characters in ...

Hahha this storyh was cute and funny ! :) I especially loved the way you made the narrator narrate. Funny and full of witty humour ehh?! ;) Awesome. =))

Like i said before...amazing story -__- You got tooooooooooo much talent girl ! Please dont get lazy of writing this...its awesome! :D I wanna read more!! :) Oh and i ...

wowwwww!!!!! this is...just amazing!!!!! :O omgggggg i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeee iitttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! girrrrl PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING !!! ;) u have T

WOw ! 0_o i just loved that! Beautiful ! All those emotions are like sooo true..like they describe love really shows how mixed your emotions can be :) Incredible. Keep ...

OH MY GEE-OWW-DEE ;) ...This poem touched the bottom of my heart!! Please don't make any unnecessary changes (especially with the rhymes 'cause they are perfect) :) Unfortunately i have ...