DomTheDumb

Every critique, review, or piece of criticism of this work must include the word 'bananas' at least once. If 'bananas' is not used, the critique is incomplete and must be ...

Yeah I'm just posting it here in chapters because I'm posting as I go. It's not actual chapters lol

The ONLY place I'd disagree with your review (incisive, as usual) is: I feel like this would have been a good place to start the next chapter! It's going to ...

Two things: I wanna return the favour lol (i.e. you've been reviewing a lotta my stuff) It seems genuinely interesting :)

Ngl I really wanna read this, but walkers first!

Ty so much for your considered reviews, Hira! It really means a lot. And you, and other reviewers, are 100% right that the information density is just nearly impregnable. When ...

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it. Yeah the repetition of "he hated crowds" is just an error. I'll nix that. If you want to read the novelette this ...

Thanks! Glad you liked it :) This is actually a kinda spin-off of another work of mine, "On the Edges" which I've also posted here. You don't need to read ...

Fair enough. The thing you should focus on most is overexplaining. The trick with poetry is to let imagery and subtlety do the heavy lifting. The best poems are thick ...

See @tikaya??? I can be kind and not mean!

Hello hello! Ty for the rev, rev. As usual, largely spot on. I plan to send this to some lit-mags so it's very helpful. Other than that, the only place ...

This is EXACTLY what I was looking for. I was at the end of my bloody rope on edits and I had no idea what to do, but I knew ...

I genuinely detest creative anything teachers. You CANNOT teach creative writing. You can teach sentence construction, grammar, definitions, etc. but you CANNOT teach creative anything. Either you got

"Overwritten"... Yup that's the word! Thanks, Ad! Appreciate the review :)

Hey, odd. I'm glad I could help. Please note: I am not trying to be harsh. There is potential here and, with just a little bit of discipline, this story ...