Djinn

I agree about his rash behavior but the way I interpreted it was that the queen, Rana, was emotionally hurt from being away from her children and not even knowing ...

Thank you for your thoughts. I'm trying to aim it toward younger audiences but not talk down to them like some books I've come across. Do you think the vocabulary ...

Thank you! My professor required us to say 'this paper attempts/compares ect.' I do like how you changed it though and I think it makes it a better paper. I ...

For some reason commas below are turning into code in the comment section. Sorry for the trouble.

First off, I'd like to say that though my writing style is different it most certainly does not need to be archaic and that was definitely not my intention. This ...

Thank you for your review. I've updated the chapter above so hopefully it's a little better. I took into account your comment about inconsistent and rough sentences and will try ...

Thank you so much for your review. I do have a horrible problem with tenses and it seems no matter how many times I reread something I don't see any ...

Thanks!

In scripts there aren't any quotation marks. But thanks for pointing out that laughing thing. I wouldn't have caught it without your review. Thanks!

Thanks!

Thanks for your review. Actually it's one word. I have a teacher who actually worked in one of those places. And, yes, they should be italizised but when I posted ...

Thank you for such good reading. I do see how they are very similar with not just theirs but also yours. I suggest you note how Doyle develops characters mostly ...

Thank you so much for the review! I know I have that problem and I was hoping I had fixed it this time. Darn XD Thanks again for the review!! ...

Reading back over it I'm sorry I was such an a**. I had recently re-watched that beginning episode so with every mention that was similar and spot on I could ...

Oh wow, somebody already commented on old english/middle english. Now I feel foolish :(