Djinn

I feel like this poem is about a breakup...you purpously compared an onion to love and sin. Are you ok??? I kinda liked it despite the sad, powerless, forlorn, empty, ...

I always find that it's really hard to critique poetry because poetry is all about emotion no matter what's wrong with it. However, I really liked your poem, and dont ...

Hey, I really, really, really, REALLY like this. This is awsome. I mean-not in a sadistic way, but in an awsome way!!! It's really hard to critique poetry, but when ...

hey! nice poem! As always, it's really hard critiqing a poem because there is so much leeway given to the writer on presentaion of emotions and the set up of ...

HOLY---!!! That was EPIC!!! I really felt like crying afterwards!!! I loved it. It left me speechless yet with so many questions! I love your details and story. There really ...

hillarious. The only thing is that that song will be stuck in my head for DAYS NOW. thanks. thanks alot. really appreciate it. (i hope you've realized by now that ...

Hello! I just want to say, what a great piece. I only picked up on one mistake that i could see: " The voice laughed. Silly psychologist. Don’t want to ...

Wow. Well, let me just say, you're pretty long winded, aye? That was a lot to comprehend, so my first suggestion is, maybe, break it up a bit? The story ...

As i have perviously said many times before, poetry is the hardest to critique because it all has to do with the writers own feelin g and 'poetic liscense' if ...

My teater are vapires? I found it pretty hard to be afraid. At first I thought you were making a mistake on purpose but the more I read, the more ...

i have said before that poetry is often hard to critique but yours is really good! i quite like it. im filled up with this emotion so well put into ...

So, the name cought me and i was interested. the text bored me at first, but towards the middle it started to get interesting. only a few of gramatical mistakes.one: ...

I've said this before, but i really think poetry is hard to critique because of all the different 'poetic lisence' so to speak. i really liked this despite how it ...

It's always hard to review poety because it's so personal so some people might not like the way other people like. i though this was a very interesting piece. i ...

Hey Quasi, just like to say, great piece! I really only have two points i'd like to say. One: there might have been a previous installment but this is great ...