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This is a good story. Although very optimistic, you have tempered it enough that it simply seems pleasant. It is a lovely little tale, though it is very short. It ...

Thanks so much for the detailed review

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Good pic. Tasteful and evocative. I hope the same could have been said of the poem. Its entirety too innocent and simple, and thus infidel to reality. You are not ...

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Well-done.I mean it.The story feels personal and honest in a way not many tales so.The language is evocative and Impressive.You undeniably have a way with words.But perhaps the pacing could ...

Thank You. I like the tip about writing about the first person. Have a good day !

Thanks for writing such a detailed review

Thank you so much for taking the time and writing such a lovely and detailed review.Have a good day !

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Funny It Is despite the humor there.I mean It's self-deprecating but In a good way.Its tinged with a healthy amount of Insanity after all.I love Insanity ! Honesty though,It adds ...

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I am curious.Are you naming the characters with any particular objective In mind.Any nationality ? What's the kind of story you are looking to write ? Names carry a lot ...

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I am curious.Are you naming the characters with any particular objective In mind.Any nationality ? What's the kind of story you are looking to write ? Names carry a lot ...

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It's very evocative.A poem has achieved true excellence when the verses,alongside being eloquent,also manages to convey a story.The tree's life,despite the simplicity of Its purpose or perhaps because

Thank you so much !

There's a furious yearning in the poem,despite the resigned acceptance.You are an intelligent writer,and your poem this is not merely an expression of your feelings but an introspection of them.The ...

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Very good.Quite the focus less on power stats and more on storytelling though.Create drama and don't just narrate.Forgive me saying so but the characters are a bit one-dimensional.Seek other perspecti