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This poem ventures into the realm of introspection and evokes a sense of nostalgia. The imagery of holding hands on a clear summer night and the notion of slipping into ...

Well done. It is a mesmerizing piece that hypes up the birth of the Empress like it's the coolest thing ever. We've got golden hands grazing, roosters going nuts, and ...

It is anvocative and introspective poem that explores loss, companionship, and the passage of time. Through vivid imagery and metaphors, the author conveys the narrator's emotional journey with a blue

Hi vampirecone, Quite brilliant. I genuinely wasn't expecting something of this calibre. I mean, there's such raw emotion blistering in the lines. Well done. You have managed to create two ...

Why do people think the lack of formatting is a good aesthetic ? It is not. Its a good poem. Too vague and fumbling, but you can see the poem ...

Good pic. Tasteful and evocative. I hope the same could have been said of the poem. Its entirety too innocent and simple, and thus infidel to reality. You are not ...

No Stanzas ? Strange, but not necessarily bad. You have such masterful control of your language, such refined and clearly stated points. The repetition helps to create an immersive quality ...

It seems as if the children feels trapped, haunted by the ever- present threat of their mother.And if it indeed so,it is well - done. I will suggest a bit ...

Goooood. Your use of descriptive language Is very Impressive. There's some raw, honest emotions out there.' An Island Of Retributional hope ' ? Fricking brilliant. You have an way with ...

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Well-done.I mean it.The story feels personal and honest in a way not many tales so.The language is evocative and Impressive.You undeniably have a way with words.But perhaps the pacing could ...

Well-done.I mean it.The story feels personal and honest in a way not many tales so.The language is evocative and Impressive.You undeniably have a way with words.But perhaps the pacing could ...

Well-done.I mean it.The story feels personal and honest in a way not many tales so.The language is evocative and Impressive.You undeniably have a way with words.But perhaps the pacing could ...

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Well-done.I mean it.The story feels personal and honest in a way not many tales so.The language is evocative and Impressive.You undeniably have a way with words.But perhaps the pacing could ...

Ughhhhhhh.I am already so tired of such stuff from Instagram.Just let us wallow In our misery! We feel so self-conscious about complaining uselessly when there Is a certain section of ...

Capitalize the proper words.The fourth para Is Interesting,but It could have done with an extra line.Overall,the poem Is very good.Suprisingly so.But,may I suggest making the title more...poetic ? It