DiannePan

" His voice lay in her mind like a bedded lover. I I love this line- a perfect start She'd been overanalyzing every word he'd said today, each time uncovering ...

Hello there, Well this was definitely an excellent read. I absolutely loved the way you didn't pile your story with ornate adjectives and that you didn't drone on and on ...

Haha! Goodness! This grabbed my attention as I'm an editor for our HS newspaper. What you wrote is so true, it's a bit like an implicit truth about HS, no ...

Hello there, This is just gorgeous. I've rarely read something so short but with so much raw emotion. Really your presice vocabulary, the rhythm and tone of it all is ...

Hello there, Since this is supposed to be a serious piece of work I decided to make a *serious* review for it. Maria hobbled from her straw bed, dressing on ...

Hello there:3 First the nit-picks L- leaving the other one alone. - The base of every relationship O- over you. - I am so over you! Until that party next ...

Hello there, I was really touched by the story and it has a great potential but here are my two cents of a constructive critic. Firs the nit-picks I was ...

Hello there, You definitely got something going for you in terms of writing skills so you shouldn't abandon writing; however there are things that need improvement. I can't really imagine ...

I smiled my way through the whole thing; its lovely. Its just the way I feel about writing, like its something sacred. A job well done and idea greatly brought ...

Hello there, I am usually very critical when reading different pieces, I mean, if you write, you've got to put an effort into it. However, Your piece did not just ...