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Haha! Goodness!
. However, the ending threw me off a bit: " For a lack of better conclusion" perhaps you should sub a different word instead of *better*. As a writter/reporter/jornalist you should portray your superiority (sounds conceited I know, but thats how we writers roll)in a way with words so maybe something akin to this : "For a lack of pop cultural mindtripping conclusion and" the Latin classes part was excellent though.
This grabbed my attention as I'm an editor for our HS newspaper. What you wrote is so true, it's a bit like an implicit truth about HS, no one [i]really[i] wants to acknowledge it.You succeeded as a writer to get a message across. I very much enjoyed reading this
But I don't know, maybe it's just me and my evil editor nit picking