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Re: A Little Different
Very cute; I liked how you naturally evolved a friendship to a relationship. Nice use of power verbs and keep writing.
Apr 24, 2013 -
Re: At The End Of The Storm There Is Always Light
Kazeshini, this was beautifully written. I agree with Rosen... seems like a small error in the 3rd stanza (we, hearts...). Also, nice rhyming. Keep writing.
Apr 24, 2013 -
Re: Mom
Eman, this is really deep and heartfelt. Careful with grammar errors (subject verb agreement, spelling...etc...) your emotions were expressed beautifully. This "woman" seems admirable. KEEP WRITING!!!
Apr 24, 2013 -
Re: LIFE IS LOVE
Manny2310. You over did it on the similes, but I'm aware of your effort despite your difficulties in writing. Careful with the grammar errors (comes, wraps....) KEEP WRITING.
Apr 24, 2013