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DRAMA! I L.O.V.E. this story, I truly do, it seems epic! Just one, teensy, tiny yet kind of annoying tid bit: " Your crazy lady." AAAHHH! I hate that! it's ...

Hey there, first off I'd like to say thank you for making this story before I actually watched sucker punch, it will make the movie more interesting let me assure ...

I love it! I just love it! Though you do repeat the words "She was blind" just a teensy bit too much, but other than that a fnatstic story with ...

I love it! Amazing Imagery, amazing ending, ladies and gentlemen we have a new William Shakespeare! Though I did notice a few teensy tiny mistakes: She dipper her head; half ...

Hey again! Short but sweet, I like it! though I did notice a few mistakes: Cynthia shook her head yes. That would be nodded . Generally when a person shakes ...

Ok first of I love/hate this story! I love it because the imagery and idea is amazing, I hate it because John is a ******* that deserved to die, so ...

Love the poem! It's completely relatable to me, I love YWS! Anyway I love the poem and great job, even if you just wrote it that day it looks really ...

Sweet Jesus holy christ mother of god and all the siants in heaven and GEEZUS! WOW that was a good story! though i did notice this one bit: “Remember it! ...

LOOOVVVVVEEE IIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTT < yes i had to make it that long, it's how much i love it! I'm so happy for you Drama! And nice use of "God bless this ...

Hey Ishizzle! I loved this poem! there was this one bit: “You can’t see Him, how do you know that He’s there?” You can’t see oxygen either, but that’s what ...

HEEEY, God this chapter is so good, it's like chocolate ice cream with warm cake, hehe yeah, i have no idea what I'm talking about either! Anyway, I love the ...

Love it! the story sounds really good, I think the story has lot of potential, though it does get a little confusing at times, but that could be ne :P ...

I love how it starts off like it;s gonna be a critical poem about how YWS is making your life hard with this: Thanks to you I never finish my ...

I love how you are able to make the reader imagine whats going on, though i do have one tiny piece of advice for you “Whoa.” Kevin stared at Ava. ...

Great job pointe, but i did notice a few things: saw Kevin standing over her and threw her arms around her neck. i actually tried that once i read it, ...