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A million thanks, Biscuits! I will try to do some more editing later. Thanks again for setting aside so much time to read this story.

Hi, thanks for reviewing! His name is pronounced "Wolf-man." ^^

Thanks for reviewing. I think you're the first to say that you like the names. :D Btw, Curi's not nine. She's around 14 or 15.

Thanks! When I put foreign, I meant different bottoms than Curi's family or people she knew like strangers. I get that can be potentially offensive, so I decided to change ...

Thanks again for reviewing. Toki's "have" was meant to be "gave."

Hi, thanks for the review. I'm glad you think the writing has improved.

Ophelia and Wolfeman work closely together on graphic work, so Curi thought it was strange he wouldn't at least acknowledge her. Wolfeman's always looked intimidating due to his very tall ...

Hey! A walker is a cart elderly people or people learning to walk again use to help them with mobility. Toki was saying it would be obvious if he were ...

Much better! I like the new details c:

Hi Hatt(able), thanks for the review. I am not disappointed at all, so thanks for letting me read your thoughts. And yeah that's pretty much the message.

Thanks for the review, Eli. I'm really glad you got the message of the story. c:

Ah, the dinner parties happen a few times a year. Curi just thinks it's ironic how her parents never have any money around her birthdays in general but have enough ...

Thank you for reviewing! When I first joined yws, I hadn't realized that. But now I post much smaller chapters or break them into parts

Very helpful! I made those changes, and I tried to take out some un-needed commas. Glad you like Toki. Ah, Taveo's comment is like the stereotypical joke parents do when ...

Thanks Gxldencrxwns, for the review! I certainly will keep writing.