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Hello Holysocks, Thank you for your informative review. I definitely have a lot to do in my next batch of editing, so this is all helpful. ^^

Hey Firerose, Thanks for your review! I made those changes ^^

Hello Shikora, Thanks so much for the review! I realize the description really is lacking, so I will definitely add more of that. ^^

Hello Pan, Thanks so much for the review and letting me know your thoughts! I like to subvert some things, but I'm still cliche when it comes to love, sorry. ...

Hey Poppy, thanks for the kind words. The Sherlock comment made me smile. ^^ Also, I changed the things you pointed out.

No problem. I loved your story. Thanks for the review! I really like your title suggestion! I'm going to change it.

Love it! It's short, sweet, and to the point. I like how you were able to showcase longing in so few words

Thank you for the review! Everything was clear to me. I will definitely try to add more details

Thanks for the review and pointing out the grammar mistakes! Those are excellent points you made that really helps me in my next editing process.

Scribbleinks, thanks for the review! I feel a little embarrassed now that I overlooked some of those obvious errors like Curi magically being back at the table. I'm going to ...

Thanks for the review, StupidSoup (interesting name). ^^ I think you're right that this is a little too filler. When I edit this chapter, I'm going to try to show ...

Thanks so much HalfbloodFangirl for taking the time to review this! I'm really appreciative that you pointed out some of my mistakes. It's true that it helps to have another ...

Hello Pan, Thanks a bunch for the review! I honestly had realized many of these things until you pointed it out like babying the readers. ^^; Also, Ophelia/party-planning parents are ...

Tu escritura es muy bonita ^^ I found this very romantic and sweet. It left me with a tender, light feeling, you know

Hey! Ah, you're talking about Cooleo. He was mentioned again in ch. 13. There wasn't really a romance subplot just some hints. But I can understand why it seems abrupt. ...