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Deskro

Deskro

  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Romantic Re: You again

    R.I.P. Casanova 1999 - 2016

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Screwed It

    Thanks for the review! :) Quite a bit to explain so I might do it another time, glad you enjoyed it though!

    Jun 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Screwed It

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad you didn't find it too confusing and you seemed to enjoy it which makes me feel great :D. In terms of the insect line, ...

    May 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Politics Re: The Patriot

    Thanks for the review :D I'm glad you liked it

    Nov 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: How to Visit Etherworld

    Thanks :D I'm so surprised at the reception this piece has generated. It's the first time I've attempted something like this and never really considered pursuing it. Maybe I will ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: How to Visit Etherworld

    Thanks! (P.S. It IS real... ;) )

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: How to Visit Etherworld

    Oh wow, thanks :D well hopefully I get some new ideas soon!

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: How to Visit Etherworld

    Thanks so much :))

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Umbra

    Thanks for the review! Your comments have been duly noted. In response to "the incident" is the fact that he is completely focused on his own survival. In his eyes, ...

    Sep 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Umbra

    Thanks for the review steam. I actually agree with your opinion on paragraph 1. I normally dislike overly descriptive passages (thanks, Grapes of Wrath) and usually try to avoid it ...

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Umbra

    Thanks for the feedback :) You're right about the second paragraph, he just kind of appears at his destination - my bad. I guess the third paragraph is just touching ...

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Umbra

    haha that's fine. I messed up the spoiler tag too :( i wish info was easier to find on here... and i wish you could edit replies ;_;

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Umbra

    Thanks for the review! Tbh, it's kind of irrelevant who the character is.. the main point is that the character isn't human, as one tends to assume it is. But ...

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Gat-o-9-Sails - #Ch1

    Hey thanks for the review! There are some continuity issues due to the amount of times I have edited the story. Originally she had gum but I changed it to ...

    Sep 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Gat-o-9-Sails - #Ch1

    Thanks for the review, here is my response (note that I am not trying to defend myself. I'm taking your advice very seriously, this is just for clarity and discussion) ...

    Sep 12, 2015


Not many will ever really understand you / That doesn't mean you aren't worth understanding
— Quillfeather