Desdemona

Mm?

Except he didn't bash anyone lmao

Oh, I agree with your viewpoint completely. I don't even think you were rude, I love satire. The rhymes were amazing, and they made me laugh too. Loved it, good ...

Oh, the Jinns. Just a mention of them is enough to send my grandma running. You say in another comment in response to Ossie that this is a memoir. Has ...

I have to hear the story behind this.

Thanks :) Yes it was intentional.

Hiya Yams. Thanks a lot for the review :) However I believe you have misunderstood Marigold. I would really be happy if you read my previous chapters as well, maybe ...

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Hey hey :) Happy review Day!!! Desdemona of Team Team Team here to review you. (No that was not a typo.) This is a vaguely Percy Jackson-iesque piece of literature, ...

Happy Review Day :) Desdemona here to drop a review. Your story was, like Taha mentioned, hard to grasp. First I thought your characters were not human. Then I thougbt ...

That does not give you a right to discourage an aspiring writer. You must control yourself if you are reviewing a work, no matter how weak or "empty" it may ...

Hiya, Elisabeth :) Desdemona here to drop a quick little review. Hmmm... How very intriguing. I thought this would be some sort of a weird royalty series (Duchess.) but boy, ...

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Thank you very much for your review. Like I said, I'm not too familiar with poetry, or haiku much. I'll be sure to implement your suggestions in my next Historical ...

Thanks a lot, Taha :)