Desdemona

My page breaks disappear when I publish my works :/

Hello! Thank you for your lovely review. I'm sorry if my message was unclear, it's about a girl who's "chained" to a place, and a boy who's free to do ...

Beautiful.

I don't know if you couldn't be bothered to say something more meaningful, or if you really just don't know any better, but I couldn't exactly help reading it the ...

I don't know how you bring clothes into this. What a person wears is their own business and nobody else's. Seems you're as shallow as the men in this poem. ...

I don't know how you bring clothes into this. What a person wears is their own business and nobody else's. Seems you're as shallow as the men in this poem. ...

And girls aren't necessarily abused by crude wrinkled men

Depends on how they portray themselves.

I'll give you a hint. Swap the words life and die. :)

@Holysocks @spectator @cleverclogs @TheSilverFox @sobering @Strange Once again, I am so sorry bout how this came out in the start. I hope now you understand me.

Bravo :) Editing after writing is the best thing to do. It's what I always tell my writer friends to do, otherwise they end up throwing out their books.

It does absolutely keep me hooked. I liked your character development, even if it did feel a little too sudden at times, like it did for the mother. It wasn't ...

Hey Costa :) Thanks a lot for your review! I have to say though that this is 100% true. It wouldn't be filed under article if it weren't. My teacher ...

Hey :) Poetry is not my line, and well, this isn't a review but still. I'd just like to say that I really liked this. Your style, with the lack ...

Awww man :( I've been trying to type a review for ages but everything I have to say has already been said... Sorry about that :(