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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Help Me Calm Down

    Hello~!! This is Blackie here to review you

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Marriages of Aura Howe- Callon Hinnor, Her first Love (Chapter One)

    Hello, Blackie here for a review!~ Mmm... I'm sorry, but I fail to see the point of this story. It reminds me of a memoir, and frankly, a memoir written ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Shadows ~ Prequel ~

    Hi~ This is Desdemona here for a review. Firstly, I'd like to say that I really liked the idea behind your story; it really sent some chills down my spine. ...

    May 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you looked me in the eyes and lied

    Hello, Blackie here to review you

    Aug 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: I Love You Elian Belt

    Hello, hello~ Blackie here to review Though I don't have much to say here. This is a job very well done. Excellent. I loved the flow of your story, I ...

    Aug 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: I will get out!

    Hello, hello, Blackie here for a review I have to say, I'm disappointed to see such an great idea written so poorly. Let's see. First of all, you should try ...

    Aug 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dear Future Husband | Edited

    Chai, Biryani, Samosa~! I'm a Pakistani and you immediately caught my eye with those three words! (Needless to say, I haven't had any breakfast. Heheh.) Anyways, this poem is a ...

    Aug 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1

    Hello, Hello~ BlackCat here to review you. First of all. WOW. Love the idea behind this story. I want more chapters from you. However, there's a small lack of fluidity ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Sinking Feeling!

    Hello, Singham~! I'm BlackCat, and I'm here to review your work

    Aug 5, 2015


If I have any beliefs about immortality, it is that certain dogs I have known will go to heaven - and very, very few persons.
— James Thurber