Denia

my god. I had to keep checking your age in the corner to make sure you were actually 16. i can only take this paragraph by paragraph. But for some ...

OH MY GOD. From the first word you had me. I kept reading hoping it wasn't a fluke and that the whole thing would be as captivating as the first, ...

I actually loved Haunting so much I copied and pasted it so I could read it again. Something so simple and just flows, but cuts like a knife. My second ...

Oh my god! !!!! Wow wow wow. Ok, so this was amazing. I don't get everyone else's problems.. I mean have they READ this genius? You are a really good ...

Hey :) I like how your lines flow.. It's soothing. But it just seems like something everyones writing about,don't get me wrong, I like it... But it could be a ...

Oooooohhhh!!! I love it I love it!! Wow. I wanna try aetdrug :D This was amazing and I thought that your use of awesome twice was fine.. Not annoying. I ...

I love this :D The title was what made me click on it and i'm glad I did. Im going to print it out and read it again and again. ...

This was amazinggggggg! When I finished reading it I felt like i had to come up for air :D It actually caused me pain.. I felt her pain. The beginning ...

I like the idea, but it dosent seem too out of the ordinary The thing that stands out is the repetition.. And that's what saves the poem It got me ...

I thought that this was pretty good :D really weirdly.. The slang works sometimes and NOT others. Your descriptions are amazing, I wanted them to go on longer :D I ...

I love this.. Especialy the part where the mud catches up to you. Everything works well together. When you mean that you left him, i think i get it.. Its ...