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Heya! Demtry here to review you :) I really liked this poem. Your line breaks are marvelous and your imagery is incredible. I do agree with magpie about "fleshy sort ...

Heya! Demtry here to review you :) First off, I really enjoyed reading your poem - your imagery is great and I love your word choices. The only thing I'm ...

Hey, demtry here to review you! First off, I really enjoyed reading your poem. Your rhyme scheme is really nice and the flow is great :) The only line I ...

Hey :) I absolutely love this poem - the simplistic language makes it so much more real. One of my favorite lines is "My favorites are the little white ones./They ...

Hey, Demtry here to review you! So I like that your poem is broken up in stanzas, but I'm a little unsure about all the perfect rhymes. Trying playing more ...

Demtry here to review you! So first off, I really liked your poem; I absolutely loved your line, "dies on an unimportant Tuesday." I would suggest in the first stanza, ...

Gah I absolutely love this! Your dialogue flows so well and your imagery is effortless. The only thing I would say is to bring a little more depth to the ...

Hello! First off, agreeing with everyone that your title is really good :) I see why the other reviewers are hesitant about the repetitiveness, but I actually like it. Along ...

Hey there! So first off, I really enjoyed reading this piece. It's brevity keeps it light and rich which is great :) Nitpicking a bit, but in line 2, I ...