Demoness

Hellouu! Demoness here to give you a review! :) This is a good one, it's got a great flow and is both easy to read and relate to. I think ...

Hi, Demoness here and I'll be your reviewer! Haha, this was a funny and sweet thing and you clearly expressed your feelings for the state :) I've never been to ...

Heii! Demoness here, I'll give you my opinion on this little piece :) Aaaow, This was a beautiful way of kiss a loved on goodbye! You really captured it! I ...

Hii, I'm Demoness and I'll give you my opinion on this piece here and now; :D Oh my,, I really loved this one. So full of both imagery and emotion! ...

Hi, I'm Demoness and I'll revewing your work today! :D Tension stares through me bore holes in my back catch the gaze look away let your eyes fall to the ...

Hi, I'm Demoness and I'll be reviewing your work! :) Okay, so overall I really loved this piece, it was beautifully described and all. But, you've made a few mistakes ...

Hi, I'm Demoness and here's a quick opinion on your work :) I think this is promising. It's a great beginning and get's the reader.. or at least me... hooked ...

Hellou! Demoness here... :) So now there was finally some action! But it's still Jonah and Tide in their secret little love world and it's cute and sweet and adorable ...

Okay... so you know I really believe in this story and I was so happy to finally get to the point where they kissed and you staged it perfectly. BUT, ...

Another great chapter! Although... I thought it was so charming that Tide was scared of the chickens, it made her seem like this vurlnerable big-city-girl but then now all of ...

Ty, you already know how in love with this story, and these characters, I am... but I can't help but tell you again.. I freakin'' LOVE this story and these ...

What do you mean this not being good? It's a very dull topic but I love the way you made it interesting and full of imagery and emotion. Soo. don't ...

Hey you, I love the story you're trying to tell here, it's real interesting... BUT, the way you're telling it just takes it down to the bottom to be honest. ...

I just got chills... it was so simple and plain but yet flowed so well and got the message through without sinking to any deeper depths an yeaah.. L O ...

Hahaha, I LOVED IT. So funny, and to say the least exceptionally random. I couldn't find much errors worth pointing out, though you have pressed enter at one occasion where ...