Demoness

Helluu, I'm Demoness and here comes my review.. or it's not a review cause I say nothing helpful it's just a declare of my admiration for the piece xDD Simple ...

Hi, I'm Demoness and I'll be giving you a quick review on this piece! :) Overall I thought this was a very good poem, it was warm, fuzzy and cozy ...

Hi you! I'm Demoness and here's my opinion on your poem! :) To begin with I thought you delivered a very important message in a beautiful way! Hi do believe ...

Haaii, Demoness here to review your work Hhaa, cute! This was a great poem with beautiful ending.. you could make some improvement on the punctuation but otherwise it was pretty ...

Okay, so I'm not going to say this was bad just because I'm bugged with you being bugged with critisism... I will though, say what I have to say and ...

Hii, a quick review of this piece which I must say was quite amazing! This was really beautiful! Although I thought the rythm was good in each stanza by themselves ...

Heey, here's my review! Okay so.. I feel that you're telling a great story here... it's just that I don't really feel the message come through to me because I ...

Hii you! I've come to inflict my opinion on your poem! Hope I can help or.. say something meaningful at least xD Oh my... This was so sweeeeet and cute ...

Heeii, Demoness here to inflict her opinion on this piece! This was fairly enjoyable... more than so, it was quite amazing. The rythm and flow was a bit off at ...

Oh myy, This was deep, beautiful and heart-wrenching! Great desciptions and imagery and you really capture the emotions! I didn't find the rythm and flow too choppy but it still ...

Oh my god this was so intense.. I had to read faster and faster cause I was holding my breath until the countdown came to an end! I love your ...

Nice work, I liked it. You clearly don't suffer from lack of imagination, so that's good... but I still think that you could've used some more descriptive words instead of ...

You've got a cool style of writing and you use great description and creates beautful settings... There were a few nitpicks but these have allready been pointed out so all ...

Oooh yes, I'd like to keep on reading! Great description and even though nothing much happened it was still an intruging beginning. As for my impressions on the characters.. The ...

There are clearly alot of little things that could be adjusted to fix this thing up a bit but the previous reviewers has all ready pointed out those things so ...