Demoness

Heeeey! Here comes a little Demon! I'll begin just picking through the details! As she walks by you , you notice her beauty. (I'd scratch the first "You" here) You ...

Hello you! Here comes a visit from the Demoness! Genereally I thought this was an intriguing and quite entertaining poem. I enjoy the playing with death - theme, it's my ...

Hello there thersites! I'm Demoness and I'll be inflicting my opinion on this little piece of yours! First of all, I really enjoyed this poem as to what story it ...

Hahaha, Mikkieee! You're aweesome! This was absolutely hilarious and fabalous and epilepticolous! I love this idea, such fun writing and I love how it feels like there are two people, ...

Hi SilentRain! Demoness here to inflict her opinion on your piece! xD Hm... This is very cliché, yet it was a cozy thing to read and I like the sort ...

MrMean!! Demon heree. I have said how I don't like to review your pieces because your way of writing is beyond my skills of reviewing but I will give it ...

Helluee you! I'm Demoness and I've come to inflict my opinion on this piece of yours! So, mainly I thought this was a good piece, it had a good rythm, ...

Daisuki! Hi, this is Demoness! I must begin with say that I am truly impressed, this is really good! Personally I am more a fan of structured poems where lines ...

Non-Rival! I don't know what that Mental Institution did to you but I it's clear your writing-skills has increased these past months. This was brilliant! I loved it! For one ...

Hi again! So the grammar in this peice was much better and you've managed your punctuation qutie well. Though the structure is very wobbly and you should really try keeping ...

Hi Joseph, and again; Welcome to the YWS! I will start just correcting some grammatic errors that I found, some where faults others are what I find sounds better. I ...

Dramatic-Sparkle! - It's the little Demon who totally forgot she loves to review but totally remembered and came to review yours only it was so good it needn't be reviewed! ...

Lumiee-Lu! I still haven't found my reviewing-spirit but I'll give you my opinion on this anyhows xD First and foremost I noticed the absence of capitals - bit annoying. But ...

Hii Bhayden! Review-day is rolling towards its end but I've got a few more reviews in me so here you go; I'll begin with saying... Gooosh, This is soo emotionally ...

Dreamwalker! Halloee! So the sweet and beautiful title caught my eye and I'm glad I chose to review this because I totally loved it! I like how this is written ...