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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Strange love

    Hey, Gun! I'm really sorry that you've had to wait this long for a review. It was a great feeling. Love, an amazing chemical reaction in the brain was happening ...

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Electric Heaven

    Hey Gal, so here's the review I promised. There was a great deal happening in this poem – or maybe that isn't the actual case, it's just the way you ...

    Aug 31, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: My Garden

    Hey Tnme! You posted in my WRFF thread, and here I am, if not a bit late. First off, I'd like to say that I agree with lordgluzman – this ...

    Aug 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Anubis

    Hi, Kylan. =) Well, I don't quite know where to start from. This is because I'm still lacking that certain confidence when looking at your work, and it's something I ...

    Aug 24, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: (Mis)communiqué

    Hey Octo! Sorry for the wait, but as you see, I haven't forgotten your request =) I also want to say that it's been a while since my last review, ...

    Aug 24, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Light in the Distance

    Hey Mira! I have to admit that the moment this page loaded, I was all like "Dots! Bad!" but then I read your A/N. It's a bit weird it wouldn't ...

    Jul 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: We used to imagine

    Hi Aqua! This was a sweet tribute to the childhood games; I'm pretty sure almost everyone can relate to it. I used to tell you how to act, Who you ...

    Jul 29, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: 19 bodies and a bag of oranges

    Kylan. =D I sat behind the counter of the family minute market waiting for closing time and watching a cortege of ants traffic across the counter and into a candyjar ...

    Jul 28, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Luna 2

    Hi, Pink! Here as you requested. =) As of this moment, I haven't read the first chapter, so I hope it's not going to dramatically affect to this review. I'll ...

    Jul 28, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Books, and why we dislike the films!

    Hi, Whisper! Here I am like I promised. I haven't reviewed non-fiction in ages (and not actually very much at all to begin with), so it might be that I've ...

    Jul 28, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Mansion chapter 8 part 1

    Moi, Anzius. Et varmaan ees muista, mut pyysit mua reviewaamaan tän joskus pari kuukautta sitten jo, enkä silloin muistanut/saanut aikaseks, oon pahoillani siitä. Toivottavasti tästä on kuitenkin

    Jul 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Paper Dolls

    Hiya, Pen! =D Floating through the cosmos Like paper dolls with wings. Our hands are intertwined, But we slowly slip away. I'm a sucker for contrast and such things, so ...

    Jul 27, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Blossoms of Phnom Pehn

    Kylan. =) Here as you requested, so let's see what you've got here. wife and children may and raped beaten and burned Hmm, wife? Not wives? Also, I don't understand ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Almost Lovers

    Hi, Maddy! I want to be perfectly honest with you and tell you that I probably wouldn't have reviewed this story if you weren't my teammate :P It's just that ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Missing You

    Hey, Maya! I remember greeting you in the Welcome thread, eh? :P Okay, so what I'm going to do is focus on the rhythm and rhyming of this poem, rather ...

    Jul 22, 2009


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