Demeter

Hi, Navita! Sorry you've had to wait for this long! (I feel like I've said that in every review I've made recently...) You've gotten such wonderful reviews already, most of ...

Hi, Flower! Sorry you've had to wait for so long! So, as you know, this wasn't very long and I haven't read the other parts, so I was reading this ...

Hi Puffycherry! Here I am, finally, sorry for the wait. =/ "You know, they're planning to make this an all girl's school." Roxanne, my best friend said arrogantly, puffing her ...

Hi there, Scream – sorry you've had to wait for so long. Well, a lot of the reviewers have already said most of the things I was going to point ...

Hi, Gal! Prokaryote is kool I like the idea of the very first line, but I don't like the vagueness of "things". In my opinion, that word choice takes away ...

Hi, Waterlily! You are engraved inside my heart; where no one else will be able pull us apart. The last line is too long for the stanza; it breaks the ...

Hi, Kyllorac! I like how the poem looks like, and I like most of the line break solutions you've made. However, I wasn't very pleased with the hyphenations, since in ...

Hi, Navita! I like this poem a lot. Like Lily, I wasn't able to knot all the threads together... but that made the poem somehow worthier to reach for, worthier ...

Hi, Navita! (Congrats on the green, by the way!) So, in my PM I told you I would look these two over, but I have to admit that I forgot. ...

Heya Kook! First and foremost, always remember to spell-check your work before submitting it. Not only it's annoying to read something that has a lot of typos, it also gives ...

Hi Jigseh, so I'm officially a terrible person for not reviewing this sooner. I read it right after you had requested the review, and didn't have enough time, so I ...

Dem > You don't know the half of what happened. I had to swear fealty to a Norse God for a copy of Wunderbaum . :P xD I'm sorry! You ...

Evi! I wanted to return the favour, since you were amazing and reviewed my story! So thanks again! So, while I was reading this, I came up with some clever ...

Hi Kylan! I think this was such a feelgood story. I probably say this everytime I comment on a work by you, but I really liked the atmosphere you set ...

Hi, Scottie! Scotland? I love Scotland! 5-7-5. Yes, it's a haiku. Hope that helped, bye! Ahem. Yeah, it's definitely a legit haiku, as you said. I like it that there's ...