Demeter

Hi, Tommy! I think this could be quite a powerful poem with some tweaking. Some things that disturbed me as a reader were your nonchalant usage of punctuation and a ...

Hi, Kitten! Nice to meet you, I'm Demeter. :) This is a sweet poem that makes me miss spring time -- luckily it's almost here! However, the title is "Spring" ...

Hi, Cspr! I decided to come and take a look at this, since a) it didn't have any reviews yet and b) the title is one of my favourite words ...

Hey, Dani! So, I like haiku poems a lot a lot, and I was excited to see that these were haiku! I've also done what you did here, which is ...

Hey Spike, I'm here as you requested :) "Slut!" they scream from behind her back as she hurries down the hallway with quivering legs. This is quite a way to ...

Hey Juju! So now I'm finally here, as I promised. I made the mistake of skimming the reviews before reading the actual story, so I was accidentally spoiled about the ...

Hi Sassykat! I saw the "haiku" in the title and immediately decided to check it out, because I love haiku! First haiku: The punctuation you used here confuses me. I ...

MARS. I love sonnets so much, and I love Marses even more, so this is quite the treat, I have to say! First stanza: I love the imagery, everything sounds ...

Hi, Rin! Firstly, I've got to ask - are you sure you have posted this in the right forum? Maybe it's just me, but it seemed more like a prologue, ...

Hey Idraax! So, I promised you I'd give this a look, so here I am! The main thing I think you should pay attention to is, in all simplicity, consistency. ...

Hey Game! Well, I have to say I really liked the basic idea of this story! It's always nice to be surprised by an interesting viewpoint, for example, which is ...

Hey Allie :) You asked me to read this so I thought I'd take a look. Don't expect anything extremely thorough from me today, I thought I'd focus on first ...

AHHH HANNAH I wanted to know what they were. D: As I started reading, I thought they were girls. Then I started to think they were dogs. Then I started ...

Hi there! I felt that this was quite "telling". It's a bit like "then we did this and then we did that and then I said and then she said". ...

Hi there, Kikialicia! There's a lyric-like vibe to this poem, it could almost be a song! I like the subtle emotion it divulges, although I must say the implementation is ...