Demeter

Sarah! SORRY SORRY SORRY I feel really awful. I keep putting things off, what a bad habit... I hope you're not completely furious at me! We wait until the hearse ...

Hey Spike, You asked for a quick review, and this definitely is one - I didn't point out all the bits I might have pointed out if I had had ...

Hey Sarah! I'm going to start from the ending, and say that it was effective. It wasn't in-your-face, it was mysterious and clear, both just enough to make the reader ...

Hey Sarah! Here are some nitpicks/other stuff: I shake my head and walk toward him. Huh. I don't know what it is that makes this sound a little awkward. I ...

Hey Micki, you're so fine, you're so fine you blow my mind, hey Micki! [/funny] Alright! Obviously this poem is meant to do good, which is - well - good, ...

Hi again, Sarah! Sophia is in the kitchen still, watching her mother as she washes the dishes by hand, waiting to be able to dry them. The way I would ...

Hi, Sarah! You posted on my wall days ago asking if I would review the second chapter of your story, and here I am! Sorry it took so long. I ...

Princess Stéllanine Samara of the Winchester Court of Luxembourg! This story makes me so happy. I have to admit, most often I only read stories on here because their author ...

Hi Mask! I've always liked it when there's a little twist like this in poetry, but I didn't really like it that you "spoiled" the effect in the description line ...

Hey, Skins, here I finally am. Sorry for taking this long! Let me do some nitpicks first. I tried not to look at him at first, but there was only ...

Hi, Creative! Here I am finally, sorry for taking so long. Do you think you could consider deleting some of those commas you seem to like ending your lines with? ...

Hi, Ehte! Here's the review you asked for. :) This poem was like still waters after the rapids that were the hectic day I had today. It created such a ...

Hi, Toe! Here by request :) The rhythm in this was pretty good! I also liked that the rhymes you had didn't sound forced. It's annoying when some words are ...

Hi, Tinkembell! First, I'd like to thank you for the lovely chocolate you left on my WRFF thread. It blew my mind. This review is probably going to have more ...

Hi, Charliezard! I love it. xD Especially the ending. Your rhymes are tight and the flow is overall really good -- the only thing that kind of bothered me (but ...