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Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Three
If you're interested, I have another story called Blood and Silver. I have been blocked from that story lately (as in writer's block) but feel free to check it out. ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Three
You right about the fact that I am not used to first person narratives. This is just an experiment.
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Two
He went over there because the rugby player was spiking his drink.
Jan 19, 2015 -
Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Two
Thank you for your thoughts;)
Jan 19, 2015 -
Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. One
What's literature without a little risk?
Jan 17, 2015 -
Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. One
Thank you for the thoughts. I was particularly worried about the Italian language part.
Jan 17, 2015 -
Re: Let it Go ("Let it Go" Parody)
I see the bridge now.;)
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Outbled
Though the war video games are fun.
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Blood and Silver Ch. Eleven
I'll see what I can do to improve it. Right now I am just trying to overcome a bout of writer's block.
Sep 17, 2014 -
Re: What She Is
Well, I am glad that I could be of service. :D
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: Blood and Silver Ch. Ten
About the PoV, this is an example of third person limited, in case you were confused. The "speaker" is the Doctor.
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Eulogy for a Dragonfly
Oh, I guess I just saw the lack of the end rhyme and I forgot to point that out specifically. And I do like the structure of this poem.
Jul 18, 2014 -
Re: Blood and Silver Ch. Eight
Could you be specific as to where I got a little wordy?
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Welcome to deh Family.
Oh, I know, I didn't mean to sound like I was panning you, it just that I have had some new members send rather mouthy replies to me for harsh ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: Mr.Fellows
No problem.:D
Mar 29, 2014