Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for language.
[ I love making parodies. It's sort of my thing. Recently, I accidentally got the idea to do this. I thought I might as well post it. Enjoy? ]
It started raining on your day off
We all think that's a shame
You got stuck at the end of the line
We understand that pain
Hell, even the waitress can't seem to get our orders right
Funnily enough, you're the one we fight
Shut up, don't shout
You'll make it worse
Problems don't get solved with a glare and curse
Got nothing nice to say
don't speak
or I will shriek
Let it go
Let it go
That happened five years ago
Let it go
Let it go
It mighta sucked but even so
We're so sick
of you being a dick
Just one more complaint
And I think I might go insane
It's funny how when you don't shut up
about all the horrible things
they seem to be even worse than they were
it's because you're exaggerating!
It's time to pass the third grade
Nobody cares how long it's been since you've been laid
Think you're right
You're wrong
You need to learn some rules
You're a tool!
Let it go
Let it go
I'm about to give you a black eye
Let it go
Let it go
You're so incompetent I could cry
You need to learn
When enough's enough
Life will go on
Even if you don't seem to ever get your way
That doesn't give you liscence to sit around and moan all day
Go out there and try to make changes for yourself
By simply complaining at us, you'll never get our help
Let it go
Let it go
Stop being a shit
Let it go
Let it go
Don't you think we're tired of it?
I don't care
It's time to stop whining
Can this be something we outgrow?
You gotta pick your battles, bro
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Omg !!!
I Laughed so hard here ..
We're so sick
of you being a dick
Just one more complaint
And I think I might go insane
Well this mesaage just made my day ...
You're so incompetent I could cry
You need to learn
When enough's enough
Life will go on
You need to learn some rules
You're a tool!
Very inspiring . I am unable to fine any mistake. Your writing is clear. Congrates to you that you successful to convey your message in simole language.
i am going to forward this to my depressed friend who has hold things from 5 years back.
Thank you ..
You gotta pick your battles, bro 👌
HAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHHAHA OMG SO FUNNY....Yes, thank you, I love this. This was brilliant which means I've not enough words to make this into a review. xD
This was one of the funniest things I've read in awhile. I couldn't have written a better parody to "Let it go" that's this satirical. Awesome job! Keep up the good work, really. I couldn't stop smiling and laughing while enjoying this.
Stay flawless,
Valerie
This was one of the funniest things I've read in awhile. I couldn't have written a better parody to "Let it go" that's this satirical. Awesome job! Keep up the good work, really. I couldn't stop smiling and laughing while enjoying this.
Stay flawless,
Valerie
That was really good, I was playing the song in the background and everything. I think that's cool you can come up with lyrics cause I stuck at making my own lyrics. I like to sing though. That was really God though. I didn't even find spelling errors which I always get. I like it though, it was cute, kinda. Where you trying to get at a bully cause that's what I got. I liked it though.
^Keep doing what your doing
~Toralynn~^
This one had me going on forever just laughing my guts out! (Which is not good because it's 3AM and my sister is right next to me lol). Honestly, I wasn't expecting it to be so damn funny, but it was and I would gladly share this parody with anybody else that I know. I've never been a huge fan of frozen, but this was just awesome. Great job my friend! I loved this!
i think this is funny. I honestly dont like frozen but it was very different then let it go. My sister loves frozen so if she starts being a noob ill do this to her. I have heard do you want to hide a body so many times. it is great to finally see something different with such creativity in this song. I agree with Deep crystal how its like Taylor swift.
This had me laughing so hard I have tears in my eyes. You took a Disney song that everyone love and turned into an angsty Taylor Swift-ish song about a guy being--psst--a dick. Where are you? I want to give you a hug. I'll never be able to listen to that song the same ever again. I'm sure that there are some people who will find this parody offensive (I am NOT one of them) so I am just giving you a fair warning. While this was a fantastic parody, it didn't really flow too well with the actually song. What I mean is that--guilty pleasure--I have the song memorized. In some places there were too many syllables, more than that of the actual song so it made it a little difficult to fully imagine the song in it. And where is the bridge?
Please remember that I am not trying to badmouth your parody. As I told you, it was great. I am only trying to help you improve upon it.
Have a nice day!
Next you should do a parody of "Do You Wanna Build a Snowman"
Or even Olaf's summer song.
LOL. I'd like to read more.
Hello! Thank you for your review and wonderful comments!
I actually wrote this parody while listening to the karaoke version!
I wanted to space this entire thing out better, but YWS wouldn't let me.
The bridge is "Even if you don't seem to ever get your way
That doesn't give you liscence to sit around and moan all day
Go out there and try to make changes for yourself
By simply complaining at us, you'll never get our help", just so you know!
I know some places are a little wordy, but I actually made it fit and flow when I did it! I wanted to record me singing it so people could hear how it sounded, but my voice is quite bad today, haha.
Thank you again, and if you'd like a recording of me singing it so you can get a feel for what I'm talking about, let me know!
I see the bridge now.