DeepCrystal

That was quite a piece about devotion and hopes for the future. It is great when there are women who are independent and eager to be apart of something greater ...

Interesting. After reading over this a few times, all I can say is that this is that the speaker of this poem has let the world pass by him/her. And ...

That was a bittersweet story if I may say so. The girl in the beginning being cancer-stricken? Awful. The friendship that you explicitly described? Beautiful. The way you ended this ...

Jeez! Is this supposed to be some sort of song about BDSM? Erotic pain if you ask me. While I found this readable, I feel like that you could describe ...

I've been reading a lot of dark literature lately, but this takes the reward. Death, grief, wrath, vengeance, trickery, what more can a person ask for? I admire your consistency ...

Poetry about sex. Whatever next? The rapture I saw, but the pain? I suppose that it is emotional pain and this girl I assume does not want this relationship to ...

That felt really...quick. I just seemed a little rushed and then brought to an abrupt end. Please don't get me wrong, this was a good poem, but I did feel ...

I'll be honest, while I found this beautifully written, I couldn't put my finger on the rhyming scheme. And I don't normally write my own poetry, but I have viewed ...

Wow, that was really...dark. It takes real courage to be able to confront your past the way Braeden just did, even if a vodka bottle got smashed over his head. ...

This was an interesting piece. I spotted only one grammatical error towards the top. "She pulled my up with her and I wobbled along side, following her to the door." ...

Holy cow! What a dark way to begin a story! It isn't bad, don't get me wrong, but having the main character's friend die in the first chapter took the ...

I liked this song, it had a certain atmosphere to it that I found very captivating. Being a part of the Devil's parade and being too afraid to leave? >shudders< ...

I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I enjoyed this so much, that I'll see what I can do. The speaker obviously cares very much for this girl that ...