DeeBee

Hey, first of all I'd like to say that I really liked this piece. The grammar could use some work, but the other review pretty much addressed most of those ...

Hey, and welcome to YWS!!! I'm a newbie around here too, so it will take a little getting used to, but you'll love it here. :) First off, I'm going ...

Hey there! First off I'm gonna say that I really liked this piece. It flowed well with some good descriptions and I could understand for the most part what was ...

Hey! So, I'm going to start off with the things that I don't really get or know what's going on. I loved the whole piece but there were a few ...

I really loved this piece! It's got a great storyline, so far as I can tell, and a lot of interesting characters. The conversation is very lively and quick, which ...

I really like your writing in this piece. The different images that you use to describe what you felt really gives the reader a better idea of who you are. ...

First of all, might I just say that I am ridiculously impressed. It's a very short piece but you manage to turn it into a beautiful, very dramatic and moving ...

Hey! So, some things that I liked and didn't like. What I liked was how much feeling you put into this piece, you could definitely feel the emotion that just ...

So I really liked this poem. It's short, but very powerful with kind-of a haunting darkness that blurs the whole thing through. A lot of emotion and it's all described ...

So, first of all, I'm gonna say that I really like it! I love the way you describe things, both the physical part of the people in the story, and ...