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Hey there Planve! I really liked what I read so far. At first I was full of questions as to why this teen was walking across such a desert area, ...

Hey there Cirute, Here to give you a review. This quite a long chapter, and from what I know of YWS, the shorter the piece, the easier and less daunting ...

Hey Fortis! It's been a while since I've reviewed any poetry because well, I've been into novels! Time to get back to it though, so excuse me for being a ...

Hey there Serene! Don't mind me being really picky about this chapter, because I have to look closely to find small things wrong about great chapters! I liked this because ...

I think this will be the last chapter I read tonight. Then I should really only focus on homework. Nice chapter. I'm glad to see some official action happening now, ...

Hola! This will be a shortie. I've really come to admire your writing skills and your own personal style. It's always in character, it's always realistic even though we are ...

Back again! Hello :3 What. an. amazing. chapter. You wrote it wonderfully! There was suspense in there and intense emotions from Goro, and we got to see what going truly ...

Hey Serene! Here for another round of reviewing chapters :) This will be another shortie because there isn't too much for me to pick on that hasn't already been mentioned. ...

Hey Serene! The further I dive into the story, the less I have to complain about in my reviews. I am glad to see this story has improved so much ...

Hi Serene, I like this chapter. It's nothing too amazing or exciting, it's more just once again showing the characters connections emotionally to each other. And we get to see ...

Hey there again :) This'll be a shorter review because it was a good chapter. And in good chapters it's hard to pick faults. I liked this because we got ...

Hey Serene! I finally got round to reading this chapter. Sorry that it has taken so long! I'm mighty glad I did though, because this story is wonderful! It's so ...

Hey there! This was a very good chapter. You had plenty of details in it I didn't see in other chapters, and the whole story had a smooth feeling to ...

Hey Willow! A short review from me. I can see how Sheri faking her death ties in with this, and she has got some "practice" now. But I can't remember ...

Heey Shady! I made it :D I haven't read any of the previous reviews like I usually do, because I'm feeling lazy. So excuse me if there is some repetition. ...