Deanie

Hey there Anabel! More to read on one of my favourite on-going novels This chapter was interesting. There was not so much in it, although it has a promising ending ...

Hey there Dragon! So I read a few of the first chapters so that I could review this and kind of understand what happened. Whatever happened between chapter four and ...

Hey there :) Of course I'll be interested in reading anything you write! Although I must say, this was very good and I don't have much criticism for you. It ...

Mwhahaha I am here on time for once! :D (Note the m) I have to say, these chapters are getting better and better and a lot more hooking for me ...

Guess who's back. Back again. D: I liked this chapter a lot more than the other one! It gave me a lot more details and answered a lot more whys ...

O Tiny Tim! I am here finally :D Okay, I would like to start by saying I am sorry if I repeat anything someone else has said before because I ...

Hey GossipGirl Yes I have come back to read more! Let me begin with a little nitpick: Everything seemed so- old I think you can remove the little dash here. ...

Hey Arli Back again for the next chapter! I found this one was definitely better than the last, I liked it a whole lot more. I also think it was ...

Hello! I came to review your piece at long last. Thank you for continuously reminded me. I would like to say that you have a very good first line. Just ...

Hey there Calvinn! Deanie here, terribly late but here nonetheless. I'm going to find this difficult to review because I can see the previous reviews have done a wonderful job. ...

Hey there! Here to review this with one minute to go in my Christmas ;) I think this was good. I get what you were trying to bring across, and ...

Hi Willow, You're evil... just that cliffhanger! What's Sheri going to do now? How is she going to get out of this one? I know she didn't actually try to ...

Hey Kman! Thanks for already telling me you posted this chapter. I saw you did it just now. You did a good job of maintaining the battle scene and keeping ...

Hey Willow! Me again :) Another good chapter. Now this kind of ties up a lot of loose ends as to why the homeless were seemingly working for Sheri before, ...

Hey there Willow! I finally have some time to review this. Happy Christmas Eve! I hope your dad likes his present. Anyways the good: Ah, how I have missed this ...