Deanie

Hey again :) Nice to have another chapter up to read. It was interesting to see him in this detention center. We got to see a bit about the Noxcus ...

Heya! So, this was nice a chapter. We got to know a bit more about Madison, and she was one of the characters I thought I knew the least about. ...

Hi there! Another chapter to read :) At this point the person I feel most sorry for is Vanessa. Every truth is being revealed to her about her boyfriend, and ...

Hey there Batman! I read the first chapter before I read this one so I would know what was happening. I would like to tell you that your mixture of ...

Hey Tiny Tim So, this will be a short review from me because well, you've had some pretty awesome reviews so far which cover most of the things I would've ...

Dory! I have read the first chapter also and I have to say, you have amazing, like literally AMAZING descriptive skills. I love it so much. It really draws you ...

Hey there Asante! Here for the last chapter posted. There isn't too much to say because it was reasonably short and mostly dialogue, but I'll try ;) It was nice ...

Hey Asante! Back again for more. Another great chapter. You've really got your own writing style, and the way you're writing this story makes me just want to keep reading. ...

Hey there Asante! I really really like this beginning to the story! You've set the scene perfectly. We know there was a crime committed and someone is dead, but we ...

Hey Maryanne! So this was interesting. I guess now I know what you think about cutting. And yes sometimes I do think people can do it for because they want ...

Hey Isha! I hope you feel honoured. You get my 700th review, yay :D So. It was a short chapter but it gives up a lot of a bigger hint ...

Hey Willow Sheri is faking her death... right? RIGHT? Just like in the series... right? And is Moriarity really dead as in that's it? It seemed like, too easy. So ...

Hey Clarity! I must say, this may only have a few reviews but I think you can tell by the amount of likes how much this work is appreciated! You've ...

Hey there! I totally missed these chapters, maybe YWS missed your notification or something. Anyways here reading now :D How did your Dad like the Christmas present? Another very clever ...

Hey there Isha! I read all the previous parts of the chapter just to make sure I knew what was going on. It's pretty interesting so far, and you've definitely ...