Deanie

Hello! I was having a pretty unproductive day so I decided it was high time I did something useful and reviewed this instead... Another good chapter! I was really interesting ...

Hey there Lucrezia! So, I have been liking a lot of these chapters ^^ I chose to read your story for a random reason, and I decided I wanted to ...

Hey there Isha... You don't know how hard you make it for me to review your work you know :) The writing seems perfect. The characters are flawless, so realistic ...

Heya Spotswood... Man do you like to post long chapters xD Either way here goes! Let me start by saying how much I really admire that poem at the end! ...

Hello again! Hm this was an interesting poem. I understand how it's about having hope renewed. And you do use some lovely phrases here which make it seem very poetic ...

Me again :3 Can't get rid of me... This is going to be a notably shorter review because I love this poem to bits! I wouldn't change much at all. ...

Heya Tiny Tim... You should feel very honored... You get my 750th review! :D Let's make this one long and special then... So I remembered how you said I never ...

Heya Dory! Took me a while to get round to this, but I'm here now. ;D Until May is a really long time! I would just like to say how ...

Hi! Final chapter that is posted! I have to admit. I can find nothing wrong with this chapter that demands changing. You've got brilliant description here, the story is moving ...

Me again :3 Hello! As usual, another well written chapter. I don't know what to say really... no technical mistakes, realistic interaction and dialogue between characters and packed with action! ...

Hello! Me again! Took me a while to get here :3 This was a really good chapter! I could barely find anything wrong with it at all! I liked the ...

Hey Timmy! So, this chapter was more dialogue than anything else, so there isn't really much more to comment on which doesn't double up on what I mentioned before in ...

Heya Tiny Tim! Another story of yours for me to review. I better catch up because you've already posted part two. (Unintentional rhyme...) Well, this is something quite different. I ...

Hey there Isha! I decided to review this chapter on the story and you've decided to make it really hard for me to find any faults. I try not to ...

Yo Dory :D I decided to read the next chapter right away and not dilly-dally about it. I thought I would be more use here, but it turns out this ...