Deanie

I liked this poem. It was really nice, the comparison between the two skies. The bad and good. I liked the use of metaphors you had in there. I think ...

I think you did a pretty good job actually. It was nice to read. It showed how much a connect Peanut and the rider had made. The opening verse was ...

Hi! I've never heard of anything like this. I found this poem really interesting. I could see how you thought it could possibly be a song, but I think it ...

I loved this writing ever so much! Romantic stories might not be your style, but I loved it. I loved the whole idea that she never talks and all. I ...

Hey. This was a nice poem and liked reading it. I wasn't sure if I would get it because I didn't know what ode meant but in the end I ...

Hi Calli I found this a really sweet story. It really does sound like something a little kid would do. I love how at the end the she found out ...

Okay, I am probably going to sound very harsh, but I seriously don't mean to. I didn't finish this. I read the beginning and if the beginning doesn't somehow grip ...

Wow! I loved this poem to bits. I wished I wrote it. I like your layout, and I think you broke it into verse really well. I cannot spot any ...

A very nice little short poem which is about inspiration. I can't see any mistakes. I really liked this writing, because made this a bit different from many others. Through ...

Hi Leah, I really like this poem. I couldn't see any grammatical errors. I like the layout you chose to write in, and I really like your style. I really ...

Hi Blue! I don't think this is a rubbish chapter! I liked it a lot, just as much as the first chapter! I can't see any mistakes. I liked how ...

Really great poem! I think it was great how you added the lyrics in there, a super-duper idea. I usually like poems when they are broken into verses, but I ...

I loved this poem. I could see four things that bothered me a bit about this piece. One: My I love you This is a really little one, but I ...

I liked this poem. I think the title shouldn't have the If in it though. Its not about if she loved him, its about loving him. I find this really ...

Another really powerful poem. I think your really good at bringing across emotions. I find this poem is really deep. I guess its all about life and surviving and all. ...