Deanie

Hi murtuza! I love this poem to bits. I am highly envious of your rhyming abilities. And I love your story about how destiny and fate are two different things. ...

Big sis!!!! Well, I was really happy reading this. There are no grammar mistakes as far as I can see! I said your english is improving! And if I didn't ...

Hi Zaid I really loved your poem. The title matched it well. Your opening lines made me very eager to continue read and your last line summed everything up perfectly. ...

H delicacy! Okay, so I don't usually read plays but this was very good. I learnt a lot about the characters and understood your background. There are only a few ...

Hi Abid I would just like to say you have a really great poem there. It was long, but it was worth taking the time to read through it. Your ...

Well, hello That was a really nice poem. It was light and happy. The rhyming was brilliant. It kept with the flow, didn't seem out of place to much and ...

Hi! I don't mean to sound harsh, at all. What I am going to say is just so you can improve on your writing. Okay, I read this and it ...

Wow. This poem has so many deep emotions and feelings in it, that it leaves the reader absolutely speechless! It is terrible to think that someone has had to endure ...

Hiya Angel! I liked this poem. It wasn't too long or too short. It wasn't to confusing or complicated. It was a reasonable length and nice and simple. I liked ...

I liked this poem a lot. It was so deep and sad that I felt like crying. It is sad to know you have never een able to write poetry ...

A very magical poem there. I loved the title. I was really interested by just seeing what this poem is called. I am slightly confused by the meaning of the ...

Very nice poem. The title made me nice and interesting. It was great how you started with a question which will immediately get the reader intent and listening out for ...

I liked this poem. Although it was short, it was a very deep and interesting poem. I loved the first verse. You had such great description going on there. It ...

This poem kind of has three parts to it. Part one starts here: One hates to love One loves to hate The two of them relate. Nice rhyming scheme. I ...

Great poem. The title really made me interested. Your real good with titles. I liked how you kept repeating your main line, be not my world. I loved the last ...