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Hiya Angel!
I liked this poem. It wasn't too long or too short. It wasn't to confusing or complicated. It was a reasonable length and nice and simple. I liked the idea of it and there was a nice gentle flow to your words. I think you should be really proud of it. I loved the last line which summed up the whole poem really well and your opening verse was pretty good too. The middle was interesting and it was nice to know what the silence did to the person, how it made them feel. I wondered what the silence was. It could be like, no sound, but sometimes it is referred to as something else. The only thing I was a little miffed about was that we didn't get to know which type of silence it was.
But that was a great well thought through poem and I enjoyed it a lot
Deanie x
I liked this. It was really nice. Well done. No seriously, it was good. I especially liked the one line ending. It added to the theme of silence and all. For what it's worth, it is great. I really liked the second stanza. Overall, great job! Keep up the good work.