Deanie

Hi Empress Hmm... I'm not sure whether I like this chapter or not. It gives us all the backstory and information we need to understand the world the Empress controls. ...

Hey there Empress, I suppose it looks like I'm stalking your stories. Oh well xD I am :) So, I have read the rest of this so I can follow ...

Hey Empress, I read this chapter in three bits, which is why it took me so long to get round to reviewing it after chapter two. Anyways, here goes. I'm ...

Hey Rishabh, These chapters just keep getting better and better :) Which is definitely something to be proud of. After all the sadness and unfortunate happenings at the univ all ...

Hey Rishabh! Well, I really like this chapter. It's probably my favourite of them all albeit short ^^ That doesn't matter much though. This was the chapter which ties together ...

Hey Rishabh, This chapter I liked a lot more than the previous one. You had that nice introductory paragraph where you stated his thoughts about drugs, and then you went ...

Hey Audy So I have a list of things I was meaning to review, but when I read the title I was interested. I mean, what's moon cake? So I ...

Hey Snowfall! I've been meaning to review this for a while, and now I finally can get round to doing it! Ooh, this shapes up to be an interesting prologue. ...

Hi Willow! Nice chapter here. Great suspense as well. We know the murderer is the bus driver, but who exactly is the bus driver? We know Sheri is after her, ...

Hi Claire, I'm here as promised! Let's see what we've got here. This was a nice piece of writing. You've got some good comparisons to what love is like in ...

Hi Rishabh! Sorry for taking so long to get around to doing this review. I have been busy lately :) But I'm here now, and this is a relatively short ...

Hi Empress, So a little birdy told me to look at your stories, and I have been reading to catch up with what is happening so far! I think it ...

Hi Judy! Glad to see you back around :) I've been meaning to read and review this for a while, so here we go! I hope it's of some use ...

Hi Napier, Well this was an interesting piece of writing. I think you're very good with the use of foreshadowing a large event, even though you told us directly it ...

Hey Skins! Another chapter, huh? Well let's see. I really liked the opening to this, because you didn't directly tell us what she was freaking out about, which caught my ...