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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Muslim's Fate PART 19

    Hey Willow, Nice chapter here again. I like how this is a sort of flashback case, when really Sheri is just explaining to Eli and her friends. It's interesting to ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Muslim's Fate PART 18

    Hey Willow! I like this chapter so much, yay! I love seeing some history of Sheri, seeing the early stages of Lestrade and her and how she came to be ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 17

    Hey Willow Looks like another case closed from Sheri! Hmm I think I see the romance and at the same time I'm a little confused. So they kissed, and Irem ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 16

    Hi Willow, Interesting chapter here. It's a big step up from the previous one. I'm not sure why but I can see how this case is making Sheri reflect a ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 15

    Hey Willow, This was a bit of an unimportant chapter here. I understand how it is necessary to show that they did actually stalk this guy somewhat and it was ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 14

    Hello, What an interesting beginning to a new case. I love how Sheri was blackmailed. I am definitely curious to what could cause Sheri to be embarrassed. It sounds like ...

    Oct 17, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 13

    Willow, The end of Cold Case. Heh, it was nice to read. You've done a brilliant job with this! I am so confused though. What did I miss? What deduction ...

    Oct 17, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 12

    Hey Willow! Finally here to do a bit of catching up before I've got to go back to homework. So, let's see. You probably get a lot of reviews about ...

    Oct 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Paxton Chapter Five

    Hey there! Thanks for letting me know you posted the next chapter. I'm here to review it! I think you did a good job with this, and the story is ...

    Oct 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Heartbeats: Chapter 4

    Hey Umaima! Sorry I took so long to arrive, but now I'm here to review it! I read it, and I think it was great. The personalities of the characters ...

    Oct 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: Insanity.

    Hey DarkKn- I mean Dreamwork! It's by far time I give a little back to you for all the reviews you do for me! So, let's see what I can ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: Philosophies

    Hey Bloodink, This was thoroughly interesting to read, and I like your perception of things. I know, I know, I already suggested you a club and now I feel like ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Technology, Technology Re: Too Much "T"

    Hi Json, Here to review this essay! I think you did a great job with getting enough facts in there, and explaining the affects of technology. I never actually knew ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: TEENAGE DILEMMA -Dar Real

    Hello there :) I would like to congratulate you on your great essay! You've done a great job of trying to describe what it is about a teenager that makes ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, Other Re: Teenagers Demand It

    Hey Ren I'm here to do a review on your essay. It has a lot of interesting points as to why teenagers feel the way they do, and why this ...

    Oct 15, 2013


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