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  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic
    Re: Sumitha

    Hey Singhvaibhav, This is my first review in a while, so don't mind if I am a little rusty! For starters, I really love the story you've presented here, and ...

    Jan 13, 2019

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Garcia and Gracie A - 2/3

    Hey Bella! Back again to review this part! I don't really have too much to say, actually because while I was reading I didn't really feel compelled to take any ...

    Mar 3, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction
    Re: The Progeny: Chapter 6

    Hello Miss Ganga! Me again to bother your with another review :3 This chapter actually answered a few things I mentioned wanting a little more of in the previous chapter. ...

    Feb 12, 2016

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Garcia and Gracie A - 1/3 *EDITED*

    Hey Bella! So this review has been a long time in coming but now I am back from traveling I am going to be reviewing these two parts next! I ...

    Feb 12, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction
    Re: The Progeny: Chapter 5 (Revised)

    Hi Miss Ganga! Man, you've made it really hard for me to review these chapters! Simply because they are just written so well. I'm pretty amazed that he was able ...

    Feb 1, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: The Progeny : Chapter 4

    Hey Miss Ganga! Deanie's back again with a very mini review for you this time. I basically loved everything about this chapter and didn't really take too many notes, so ...

    Feb 1, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: The Progeny: Chapter 3

    Back again Miss Ganga! This chapter... whoa. It was so perfect. The plot is thickening. I can only leave these two comments because I can't think of anything much that ...

    Jan 31, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: The Progeny : Chapter 2

    Heya Miss Ganga! So as requested I am going to start reviewing your novel. I have read all the previous chapters but I saw that they had received some really ...

    Jan 31, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: Bad Seed (extract)

    Hello MissGanga! It took me a while to get here but I am ready to review as requested! I think this was a reasonably good extract. I had quite a ...

    Jan 31, 2016

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Satire
    Re: ​The Beauty of Educational Prison

    Hi Lightsong! I am back again to review another one of your poems! Happy to be reading this one :) I am more impressed with this one than I was ...

    Jan 31, 2016

  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor
    Re: She Blew Me Away

    Hello InfiniteRectangles! Here to review your poem as requested! As you said before, this didn't take me too long at all. It was all very cute with a lovely little ...

    Jan 31, 2016

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: School Kids

    Heya Lightsong! Here to review this chapter of School Kids are requested! What I had to like most about this poem was the truth in it. It seems like people ...

    Jan 31, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 3.2, The Name Game

    Hey Blackhawk! It took me a while but I am back here to review your final chapter that you have up and posted for now! I really, really like the ...

    Jan 25, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 3.1, The Name Game

    Hello Blackhawk! Me again :) I am actually really happy with this chapter. There isn't really much more I can ask for that you haven't already included in this part ...

    Jan 10, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 2.2, The Name Game

    Hi Blackhawk! Took me some time, but I am back again to review another one of your chapters! I don't really feel like there is too much to be said ...

    Jan 8, 2016


The mind of man is capable of anything - because everything is in it, all the past as well as all the future.
— Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness