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Re: Them
Thanks for the review, and as for the eat away at you, that is more of a symbol of sadness, rather than unwantedness.
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Them
Thank you! I've never seen myself as a good poem writer, and this is the perhaps the only one I've ever written, and the only one that's even mildly good. ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: Them
Thank you for the help.
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: Them
Yeah, sorry my friend JAJAJAJA posted this one here when I sent it to him for him to review it, instead he put it on here. Since then I've edited ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: Death's Warnings
I'm glad to help, and okay, so it is based on a fairy tale. That clears things up a little bit at the start. Well, still it seems out of ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: i love you
Anytime.
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: Wages: Chapter Two
Read, and I'm understanding what is going on now. :)
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: You didn't tell me you were dying
You are an amazing writer for your age then!
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: Hell's Gatekeeper (Chapter 7)
I looked into, and that is in fact a way to spell it in the UK. I do apologize for the mistake of your origin, but hey I tried right?
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: We Missed
That makes more sense to me now.
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: What if the World fell to Robots? (W.W.R.) Chapter 1: Our History- The Change
I will return to review this, I promise!
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: The Left Hand of Consciousness
I see where you were going with trying to get the reader to feel confused, but in these instances the reader was confused. The reader didn't know what was the ...
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: The Left Hand of Consciousness
I'll be back to review this!
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: The Life of a Drug Addict: One.
I promise I'll be back to review this! I love it so far!
Nov 26, 2013 -
Re: The Zarareth's Legacy Chapter 2
Thank you for the review. You caught some things I was trying to watch out for and missed. This will help me with my next chapter. When writing this I ...
Nov 21, 2013