Deadman

I really like the topic you where going after here. I often ponder the same ideas, and it's good to see someone has actually written them down. Now I'm going ...

First off I would like to say that this was a great piece and I found what appears to be a spelling error. You typed "But still I can feel ...

This reaches out to me, mainly because I respect the soldiers of Vietnam. I would like to point out that you might want to try checking your capitalization. Also at ...

I really enjoyed it, but i'd like to point out that you spelled nodded wrong, and you used the wrong kind of bale. I believe you where looking for bail. ...

This is a rather good piece I didn't find any mistakes that haven't been caught already. Though I am probably incorrect here the sentence where you say, "You take your ...