Darkmoon158

First of all, my attitude is fine, it's just when I write it on the comp. it sounds different. Second, I do take what you guys say into consiteration. Just ...

Did you guys have fun arguing? I mean it's MY story. Can't I make some things up if it helps my story and isn't too outragous? That's what I thought. ...

Well I'm sooooooooo very sorry, Griffinkeeper, that my tense bothered you so badly! If you didn't like it then you shouldn't read it. Plus, it is dramatic it just hasn't ...

She wasn't in a big accient actually a little later the doctor says she's lucky she must have someone up there that likes her because she got off easy, just ...

He, he, he. I LOVE being so evil. You guys won't find out what the italics are 'til later so, soooo sad for you I KNOW what they are. Then ...

You're right it will become clearer deeper in the story so that's my I'm not probably not going to change it's tense. :D Anyways thank you people for reading.

Hey my peeps! I've posted my chapter 2 if you haven't noticed! Don't mean to sound rude I just want some people to read it! :D If you would please, ...

Let me just say one thing, I know about the dialogue ok! I know you guys are just helping but if you read that someone has already said that to ...

Thanks. Yeah most people don't notice how old I am but it doesn't really matter to me what age a writer is just if they can write or not. :shock: ...

I was hoping you guys would like it. I have really low self esteem just so you know. Thanks for the tip on dialogue. And I wasn't talking about you ...

Oh and one last thing I ummm....don't know how to do that thing with conversations. That question is for you Eloere. A little I need help on that thing.

I apprecate all the comments but I've already started on making it better. It's new name is Rain Before Dawn and I think it suits it better. Yes Americans love ...

Yeah I thought the same thing but I wanted to see if anyone else felt that way first before I did any other chapters. I'll try slowing it down but ...

I liked it seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8) I swear most peoples don't believe me when I say that. But I do like it. It's much better than any of my poems.

Thanks guys I know break ups always end in notes that's why I wrote that. I was extremly bored in Algebra so I decided to write a poem about it. ...