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Re: I hate you my friend
I liked your poem. It had nice rhythm, like I always say, poems don't have to rhyme to have good rhythm...ok I don't really go around saying that....just so you ...
Jun 11, 2005 -
Re: The Room...my novel
Hmm...interesting. I enjoyed it but hmm, I think it's a little too much blood for me. You know what's crazy? I started a story with the exact same name but ...
Jun 9, 2005 -
Re: Mirror
big sissy posted something finally...yay! You know I love anything you write except for that one story you forced me to read, you know which one I am talking about. ...
May 31, 2005 -
Re: Guardian of Heaven
Hmmm....moon child? Why does that seem so familer? lol...well I agree I think this should be more of chapter 1 than a prologue. Again your sentances are missing something I ...
May 22, 2005 -
Re: The Gossip Of Gaffel Tavern
I loved it Sarah! I think it was the action that kept me reading it! Most stories if the beginning is lame I won't keep reading it long enough to ...
Apr 4, 2005 -
Re: Where I Belong; Prologue (13+)
I don't mean to sound rude or anything but um....I think that you said him just a little too much. I understand that you were trying to be mysterious but ...
Apr 1, 2005 -
Re: The Revenge of The Raven
I agree with Lollipop you did so good Neonshorty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and please visit Neonshorty's blog! Someone, anyone, please I beg you. :)
Mar 26, 2005 -
Re: english gothic
I think is was beautiful, amasing and every other word I can't think of right now. It was a little over my head but other than that it was great. ...
Mar 25, 2005