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Re: An Earthbound Lament
Ah no thats not a typo, its supposed to symbolize how massive the fog is. IE: stretches earths- so its big. And thanks for the review :3
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Seaworthy
Oh and you were partially right about the story, its about people who don't know they will die on the trip
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Seaworthy
yea a minds was an accident, and the rhyme scheme is aa bb... its a slant rhyme, things that almost rhyme but not quite, anyway thanks for the review :3
May 12, 2016 -
Re: He Did Not Die in Vain
you can edit it from the publishing center to fix the mistake :)
May 11, 2016 -
Re: Protector of My Heart
Love the rhythm to this work, its putting you on edge but also making you feel very protected and safe. haven't been here much so this is my first review ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: i am not the man
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May 9, 2016 -
Re: i am not the man
The repetition really makes it great, and i love the blank verse.
May 9, 2016