DarkAngle11

Unlike the last person to post a comment I thought this poem had great meaning behind it. I actually feel that I connect to this poem. I, unfortunetly, can be ...

As a guy who has had his heart broken I have to say that the description is to a key! Nothing less! This poem is a scary thruth to the ...

Awesome poem, it really is! I loved how it started and the imagery. The only thing I didn't like was it became slightly repetative around 1/3 of the way through, ...

Hey, great job. The only thing I can say that hasn't already been mentioned is, punctuation. Eather comas, or periods to divide some things. And even though it has already ...

For a short poem, it was really good! I'm just going to pick on you about one tiny thing, when you say "Faux replaces where reality once dwelled as I ...

That was a really good poem. I can't really think of anything to add to that. But I do have one little thing I was a little confused on, when ...

Really good. But I am no good at poetry. It's just not my thing. But that was really good. I just have a few things. Why were a few of ...

Amazing job!! Really, I can not find anything to pick on. The punctuation was perfect. Words, perfect. It flows nicely and everything! And the mentioning God, good use for his ...

Hey! Awesome job! There's only two little things that I would suggest, [quote="Sincerly_I_Write"][u][b]and then she was gone[/b][/u] the others whispered about her some claimed she was already dead on

Hey!! Ok AWESOME poem!! Just one really tiny thing, commas. Use tons! After some of the lines I noticed u didn't have a lot of punctuation. Totally fine, I'm just ...

Hey! Your poem is awesome just three tiny little thing's that stuck out to me. 1. Use punctuation! Anything like commas, or periods, or exclamation points! 2. Capitalization. I'm not ...

I felt this poem started some what slow and average. The begging seemed like something that was written to get an A in and English class. Then as I read ...