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DanielR

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: White noise.

    Hey, Daniel here with the review! I really liked this short story. I liked how you don't know what's going on. I saw one grammar mistake in the story. You ...

    Aug 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Ten Minutes Before

    Hey, Daniel here for your review. I like your story. I really can relate to it because my bus is the same way. The only difference is that I go ...

    Aug 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Writer's Block

    Great poem! I especially love how you wrote about something that most people can relate to. That's what a great writer would've done. A great writer would attempt at touching ...

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Cut Too Deep

    Hey, this is DanielR with a short review. Now, about the lyrics, they seem very dark, yet, they sound pretty good! My favorite part was when you said "The darkness ...

    Nov 23, 2015
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Gone

    Hey, this is DanielR with a short review. First off, you do not look 15 in your picture, just had to say that. Now, about the lyrics, they seem very ...

    Nov 23, 2015


Poetry is a phantom script telling how rainbows are made and why they go away.
— Carl Sandburg