DakotaK

Hey there! Like SassyKat said, encase should be in case. I don't know if you left it that way for effect, but after a period, the next letter should be ...

Hi Teardrop, I'm a little rusty with reviews but here goes one ok? So just for a few places that could be tidied up: Inside there was a large bed ...

Hey there, I really liked your little story. It was sweet and simple. I like Draco in the Harry Potter series, mostly I feel like he was a good guy ...

Hey there Smorgishborg, I haven't done any reviews in awhile what with school and all so I'm a little rusty. But here goes. Nit Picks: crosses people minds. I think ...

Hi Pink! I read your first chapter as requested! I see that you already got the nitpicks pointed out so I won't get into that. I really enjoyed reading your ...

Hey BigCityDreams, Here for a review! Ok, so I'll start off with the nitpicks: Once Mum had died, Just a suggestion, but the sentence might flow better if you take ...

Hey Lilicia, So I'll just start out with a few nitpicks: What was that noise The sentence would flow more easily if you said "the" noise. Something that we can’t ...

Hey Autumn Dragon, I was reading your prologue and there were just a few things I noticed: She finally read the door, and the latch was stuck. Was it supposed ...

Hey Anna, I really enjoyed reading your fan fiction on Harry Potter. Unlike some people who simply re-write what the author has written you simply took the characters and opened ...

Hey Silversun, One nitpick super fast: and you hands It should be your hands. Anyways, your story sounded a lot like a very pretty, very sad poem. The story you ...

Hi Empress, Here as promised! I see that several other people already got the nit picks so I'll just let you know how I felt about the story itself. It ...

Hey Rose, I liked how you used a newspaper article as your prologue. Now is your story going to be about the pirates, or their victims? It was short, simple, ...

Hi Faith, So is this your whole story or only an excerpt? It kinda looked as if it had gotten cut off at the end. Anyways, I'm doing these Creative ...

... ok, so I had like no idea what was going on in the least. Since this is excerpt: that's ok. I was just reading the words, images flashing through ...

I'm actually kinda new to the series and I'm on the 3rd book. Talk about action packed, there barley is room to breath before Alex is stuck in another life ...