DakotaK

Hi! So I didn't get a whole lot from the story and the ending was really confusing, why did he decide to die? And I didn't get to know the ...

Hi ~FW~ Since you've been hard at work reviewing my novel I thought I'd take a look at the sort of things you like to write. Bravo *claps excitedly* the ...

Hi ya! So Theodcyning got pretty much all the nit-picks. I really enjoyed reading your piece. It was sad but touching nevertheless. I thought it was funny, but in one ...

Hi Payne, So I will be reviewing your piece today *bows*. I'm definitely not the best critiquer but let's start off with a few nitpicks I spotted while reading, 'kay? ...

Hi Lisa, LOL, I really enjoyed your piece, especially how the "ugly stepmother" just interrupted the monotone narrator, it was great. I'll admit the dialogue was a little rough, I ...

Dreamwalker, Yes your piece has been commented on and adored by many and yet I hate reading anything without leaving a breadcrumb behind in my trail of endless wandering through ...

Hiya Shadowlight, Wow, that was impressive. I always picture things like a movie in my head when I'm reading them and if I can't do that to a piece well ...

Hiya! Look's like your post got enough nit-picks but I just had to let you know I really enjoyed your piece. A friend of mine had me watch Monty Python's ...

Hi Freewritersavvy, Like Snoink mentioned it was a bit more "technical" than most poetry, but I still loved it, very refreshing! Poetry is an awesome way to put words to ...

Hiya! Here for a review! Just a few nit-o-picks almighty leader Umm... I would change almighty, sounds a bit stuffy... have took over the whole Took should be taken They ...

Hi E.P.! So I went ahead and read your poem. Though I love writing poetry, I have to warn you I'm not very "learned" in the way of poems so ...

Hey Apple, After reading your comment; no review:) I just wanted to say that I enjoyed reading your 'documentary' lol! Wow, it seems like High school, no matter where you ...

Hi there! Just a few simple nitpicks: my father never showed his emotions You state the above, but then throughout the entire chapter there is never not a time when ...

Hello, I enjoyed reading your story, it was really a different writing style than I'm used to, which was an unexpected surprise (in a good way). I love reading stories ...

Ominous! I liked it, heh heh. I mean I wasn't sure what exactly was falling and then when she woke up, I'm like oh, it's a human who was an ...